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Re: Lead Pages Reviewed...(Warning!)

Posted: Mon Nov 20, 2017 7:19 pm
by JonOlson
rockyjohnson wrote:
Mon Nov 20, 2017 10:35 am
Would love Your Feedback.

https://goo.gl/gmjcEE
Simple and clean for sure. Love that.

Ad copy is on point and clear too.

Only thing I would add, a video :)

Re: Lead Pages Reviewed...(Warning!)

Posted: Tue Nov 21, 2017 7:19 am
by rockyjohnson
Thanks Jon.

I am so happy that my smile is miles wide, that You love my landing page.

I have not thought of video as low timers at TE's, and most of the World still having slow networks with unreliable connectivity.
Videos can take up lots of bandwidth and page may not even load till user flips to another page.
JonOlson wrote:
Mon Nov 20, 2017 7:19 pm
rockyjohnson wrote:
Mon Nov 20, 2017 10:35 am
Would love Your Feedback.

https://goo.gl/gmjcEE
Simple and clean for sure. Love that.

Ad copy is on point and clear too.

Only thing I would add, a video :)

Re: Lead Pages Reviewed...(Warning!)

Posted: Wed Nov 22, 2017 9:56 pm
by NFO-Wisdom
Rocky, not trying to pop your bubble, but I'm going to share my point of view.

The first thing i'm reading in BOLD letters is starting off with a Negative point,
telling visitors they are not going to Succeed, most likely the readers already felt
like they have been kicked enough, now more in their face.


I understand the logic your doing.


How about this instead.

Succeed Online, Building Your Blog, the Right Way!

Succeed Online, Building Your Blog, the Correct Way!

Re: Lead Pages Reviewed...(Warning!)

Posted: Thu Nov 23, 2017 9:28 am
by rockyjohnson
Thanks Sir, for the suggestions. Will Apply them.

Re: Lead Pages Reviewed...(Warning!)

Posted: Fri Dec 01, 2017 9:56 pm
by carljohndavies
Would love some feedback on my new lead page?

http://clika.pe/l/7367/67597/

Re: Lead Pages Reviewed...(Warning!)

Posted: Sat Dec 02, 2017 11:52 pm
by JonOlson
carljohndavies wrote:
Fri Dec 01, 2017 9:56 pm
Would love some feedback on my new lead page?

http://clika.pe/l/7367/67597/
This is really good dude.

Only thing I would recommend. Maybe try a different background, a solid color so the video sticks out even more. Split test and see.

But it's brilliant. Perfect video and simplicity in the design.

Re: Lead Pages Reviewed...(Warning!)

Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2017 6:12 pm
by carljohndavies
Thanks Jon for your feedback :)

Changed the background, and will do some testing. Appreciate it!

Re: Lead Pages Reviewed...(Warning!)

Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2017 12:23 am
by lenamarie
Y'alll already commented on my squeeze page, I adjusted it and the changes doubled (at least) the signups....

Re: Lead Pages Reviewed...(Warning!)

Posted: Wed Dec 06, 2017 12:15 am
by blainjones
carljohndavies wrote:
Fri Dec 01, 2017 9:56 pm
Would love some feedback on my new lead page?

http://clika.pe/l/7367/67597/
Video? CHECK
Personal Brand? CHECK
ACA? CHECK
Building Your List? DOUBLE CHECK

Love it!

Re: Lead Pages Reviewed...(Warning!)

Posted: Wed Dec 06, 2017 7:34 pm
by carljohndavies
Thanks Blain. Appreciate man!